Dear Sean, You had good writing but most of it was Arlys, Makes me wonder how it is exactly your work when you only did 19 words and a picture. At Least it had some good maths. I extremely like how it started off with telling us how to do Area, Perimeter and Volume. I don't know how you could improve only I do think that you should get better close ups with the cubes on the end slide because you can hardly see them at all. I actually have a question. Why did you spray the water in front of the cube. Infact why did you do it at the drinking fountain at all. Well It was a good piece of work but if you're going to put it on all of your guys blogs do a slide each at least. Your Sincerely J. Costello
Dear Sean,
ReplyDeleteYou had good writing but most of it was Arlys, Makes me wonder how it is exactly your work when you only did 19 words and a picture. At Least it had some good maths. I extremely like how it started off with telling us how to do Area, Perimeter and Volume. I don't know how you could improve only I do think that you should get better close ups with the cubes on the end slide because you can hardly see them at all. I actually have a question. Why did you spray the water in front of the cube. Infact why did you do it at the drinking fountain at all. Well It was a good piece of work but if you're going to put it on all of your guys blogs do a slide each at least.
Your Sincerely J. Costello
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